I honestly Have not seen a piece of art based on flutterbat quiet like yours. It is remarkably beautiful and well crafted with great colors and emotions created inside. Fluttershy is truly frightened and upset to see herself like that. every part of normal fluttershy shows hesitation sadness and fear. I am a bit confused on flutterbat though. Fluttershy is obviously paying attention to her bat self but it looks like flutterbat has her sights sets on something else in particular. This may just be my imagination or picky mind at work. Also her nose looks sorta like something was stretching her skin in two different directions while pinching on it. Those are just minor things that stuck out alone. Overall I would give this a 9 out of 10. I really enjoyed it. Both the ponies and the emotions felt in this were really well crafted. Keep up the great work.